One super sunny Saturday in April Oprah went fishing at lake Tekapo. There was thousands of boats on the water and trillions of big fish in the lake. Oprah had no luck for awhile and then whammy she had this monstrous big fish on her rod. She struggled and struggled for a very long time before she landed her fish onto the boat. Oprah was very exited because it was the biggest fish in the whole wide world. She won the lake Tekapo fishing cup for the biggest catch of the day! Oprah felt exhausted and very happy after her amazing day.
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Ben. I loved your story in many ways! I liked your adjectives, how eventful it was and how you explained her struggles.
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